All Comments on 'Incessant Pt. 09'

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cybercrittercybercritterabout 3 years ago

Awesome story. I love that this story is about more than just the sex. Although the sexy scenes are great. Can't wait for the next installment. Please continue the story.

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 3 years ago

Really hot sex, but it is getting a little repetitive. I find myself skimming sections trying to find the relevant parts of the plot progression. Solid story, but I'd like to seem some order restored in this chaotic family dynamic. There will be a pecking order and I'd love to see how you play that out. If Riley consummates her relationship with him, has kids, does she move to the top? Is it Blake? Emily? Where does Terry fit in?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hot is incestuous fucking more and more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I need riley to come back lol

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LATEST (September 17, 2023) Hi everyone! I want to apologise for going radio silent for several months now. Life has been a clusterfuck and I'm only getting back to writing since a few days ago. It feels like my creativity is slowly coming back, but it's pushing me to make s...

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