All Comments on '"Incest Submission": Mom & Son'

Hot, really good story. Until...it got so fucking crazy with grandma. Now really... you could have done a couple of pages of Master and Slut Mom...and finished as a 6*

I would have liked the story more if Nana had not been involved.

If she had to be included,I like the suggestion of the reader who suggested

that Nana should have been shocked and decided to go investigate exactly what

was going on.

Very very hot from the beginning to end involving the mother son relationship in such a erotic incest level. Introducing naani should be seducing and more erotic.

Oedipus complex in reverse and an 18yr old taking advantage and getting laid. He can't turn down a stocking clad submissive slut. Now, the daughter is going to find out about her mom being a submissive slut too. Master is going to really get lucky.

It was all ok until it was clear they were using cell phones during earth hour. Like the battery being drained doesn't count as using electricity because it's not currently plugged in or like it doesn't have to go to a cell tower. That shit pissed me off so much. It's one thing when your immoral actions effect only the people making them but these people tell others they observed earth hour lying and thinking nothing of it. They're helping destroy the earth whilst claiming to be saving it. Worst story on this site and the author should kill themself.

This was one of my favorite stories of all time. I loved the build up, the sexy suggestions on the Internet and the confessions as things climaxed. I don't care so much about the earth day and electronics use. It was hit and imaginative. Great job 5 starts. I can't wait to read about Nana

Loved it, cant wait to read part 2. One point though wouldnt you turn off cell phones during earth hour :P, not that i minded they didn't.

THAT WAS SO FUCKING HOT I WANTED TO TAKE MY COCK OUT AND STROKE IT TILL I CUM BUT TOO BUSY WIPING UP THE DOLLOPS OF PRECUM AND TASTING IT, SOOO FUCKING SWEET, LIKE HONEY! SO I'LL HAVE TO WAIT TILL THE NEXT STORY. MAYBE BY THEN I'LL HAVE A TABLESPOON FULL AND LET IT ROLL AROUND IN MY MOUTH, THEN CUM! THANKS silkstockingslover MOVING ON TO THE NEXT STORY!

that was the best incest story I have ever read!!I came 3 times!!!

Now let's get into NANA, with out the rolling pin. good read thanks

God I started with my mom then my friends mom's d42b

Everytime I read "Yes master", I could hear Barbra Eden's voice from the TV show I Dream of Jeannie. She has a sweet voice. I'd like to read about the three of them now.

I had a delicious orgasm while reading. Very sexy! Keep it up!

This should have been listed under ANAL. Pulling this crap on people is not the way to go. There are some of us who don't like this kind of crap pulled on us.

The Old Guy

First off I'm not sure what I pulled over you.

Second, if there is any incest in the story it must be put in the incest category so I have no choice (the only exception is illustrated stories). So not much I an do, although this story is less about anal and much more about incest so I would have put it in incest anyways.

Jasmine

What an amazing story, and loved the nana twist - please follow this up with a sequel xxx

Love Carmella xxxx

love your story .Look forward to reading more .

Next time? Please dont add anything about a grandma or a grandpa. You're giving some of us horrendous thoughts and images of grannies and grandpapas regardless if you explain how old or how young they are or how hot. Just no

Really hot story. So dirty and naughty, with a great attention to details and characterization. My favorite parts were: "Simon was floored. He had fantasized about having sex with his mother forever, and always felt guilty afterwards. He was always horny, being eighteen, and his fantasies always included his mother being his sexual submissive and obeying his every order, the way he assumed she did for his father in the bedroom when he was alive. His fantasies were often different, but they always included his mom in pantyhose, obeying his every sexual whim. Sometimes he imagined forcing her to suck his cock and shooting his cum down her throat; other times he imagined being woken up by his mom's beautiful lips; other times he fantasized taking her in the back of the car while Dad drove in the front seat oblivious to mom riding his son's cock; other times he created crazy tales full of risk, like eating Mom's pussy under the table while his father ate supper unaware of what was occurring right under the table; but mostly he just fantasized having mom suck and fuck him. Yet, as soon as he had cum, an overwhelming guilt would hit him as he couldn't believe he would fantasize about committing incest and treating his sweet, caring mother so inappropriately and with such disrespect.

Simon's obsession with his mother reached new heights after he lost his virginity at prom to Kim. It was a magical night, but as he had sex and closed his eyes, it was his mother whose face popped into his head.

It didn't help that his mother, a teacher, was often walking around the house in a skirt and pantyhose...or that, at forty-one, she was easily the hottest women he had ever seen."

And

"Submissivemom: To make me his mommy-slut

Makingmommymine: What will you do for him?

Submissivemom: Anything.

Makingmommymine: Suck his cock?

Submissivemom: Yes.

Sara imagined being on her knees servicing her son."

Keep up the great work, you are talented. I will definitely read your other stories.

Your stories are really great! Have finished Annabelle and fought it was pretty cool, job well done. Loved your pics to create more food for thought.

phased / fazed...look it up, different words and meanings.

Quite funny when someone is getting 'played', but doesn't really mind since they 'win' anyways.

Another good story from SSL.

very good writing and nice twists

hope you continue the story line

Please continue. There is so much unfinished business here. -dave

... very hot, loving and just generally awesome.

After having it done with one son why not invite the other one as well for the family fuck time.

Very nice man

Very well done. Reminds me of my own teenaged fantasies. Can’t wait to read the sequel and others you have submitted on this topic.

My mom was a good slut bitch mother Mommy she do anything I ask her to do she can lick my asshole suck my dick in public whatever I asked she did I love Mom I'm going to have her do a gangbang with some friends and she also wants to try the dog so I told her she would I'm going to have fun

Do you have direct experience with your own son? I sure hope so mommy.

Very hot it has me hard the whole time I read it.

It was a great story with just submissive mom and her dominant son, but bringing in gram to give the story some legs was very thoughtful of you. Thanx for the read and looking forward to reading the continuation.XG2JNP

This is fantastic, one of the best, if not thee best I've read. Please let there be more :)

Thanx sweetie - that was one of your best yet

Thank you for your incest stories....I love reading such stories and you are THE BEST!

Excellent story good old erotica riding to the fore nothing complicated just hot action with wonderful suggestions for more fun. Loved the phone trick. This mum & son make a great team and go granny go.

Such a great storyline and really well written. Let's hope Nana adds to the situation.

Once again and excellent read, start to finish. But then, I’ve come (no pun intended) to see that in each and every story of yours. I fully expect to see an even better contest top story submission for April Fools Day.

Of course, 5* and on to the next chapter. Much love and sloppy drool 🤤

My what a story teller. This is the first time I have read your work. I being a single retired gentleman that has been without for over three years the story had my mind realing. I had to get away from the computer after each chapter to let my over stimulated mind slow down otherwise I would have exploded in more then one way. Thank you so much for the pleasure you gave me.

SUBMISSIVE MOMS ARE BEST!

ESPECIALLY WHEN THEY ARE SUCKING OFF THEIR HORNY SON! This was a great story in its own right, but you really capped it off when you had Submissive Sara's mom lister in to Simon 3-holing his beautiful mother, and setting her up to be a Submissive to her own grandson.. I'm really looking forward to reading your continuation story with Simon's Nana in the game. Thanx for the Great Read!

Dear Jasmin, another great story. I have read some of your stories before but I’m going to read through every single one of them in order that they appear here. It may take me a while as I’m dyslexic but I’m determined to take in them all. I wish one of them had happened to me. Thanks again k...

Top notch story. Thanks for a no holes barred stroke story that is also very readable. Sometimes these two elements don’t go together with other writers. Keep up the good work you bring so much joy to others with many happy endings.

It was very different but well written and I thought it was GREAT, thank you ...........

Very hot. Hope to read son fucks his grandmother when she arrives.Bill

Holy Moly, WHAT AN AMAZING STORY

Idiotic length. All the BS about the online activity was way too long, way too distracting. When the sex finally happened it was a let down.

Great story, but I definitely would have saved Simon's identity reveal for the end. A brief epilogue line in which Sara receives a final message containing a photo of Simon winking at the camera would be perfect.

That was a very nice story, I immediately had naughty thoughts about my Mommy-Slut.

Any more stories like this?

I'm setting a goal to jerk off to every one of your stories

Omg Jasmine absolutely red hot, so debauched and depraved, pure cock and cunt lust along with cunnilingus. Cunt crazed fucker, Lanc’s UK.

I'm not one who wanted to fuck my mom, but if she had been half as beautiful as Sara was described I probably would have. That being said, my mother was a professional and she wore pantyhose all the time. I am certain that has a lot to do with my own hosiery fetish. When I was around 12, and extremely naive and innocent I had an older friend that had inadvertently teased me about whether I had started masturbating yet. I don't remember what I said but it intrigued me. Secretly I started experimenting. The first time I ever got off was in a rabbit pelt, so soft and fury (I had seen pictures of women with their hairy pussies, so I thought lets try it.) Having loved the way my mom AND my friends' moms looked in hosiery ( at this time I couldn't decern between pantyhose or stockings ,I loved and still love both) One day when no one was home I snuck into my moms bedroom and started to look for her hose, my heart was beating out of my chest ,not only at the anticipation of finding them but also the fear of getting caught. I found them , 2 drawers full of every type of pantyhose you could imagine. Mom was not a prude and I'm sure she loved looking sexy. The feel of them was luxurious . I fondled numerous pairs. Not wanting to get caught by spending too much time in her room, I proceeded to touch myself with a pair of them. Trust me when I tell you, my cock was ROCK hard and aching for release. I lightly touch my raging hardon with them, within a few SECONDS I had to throw the pantyhose aside so that I wouldn't come on them. I launched my first ever load due to pantyhose and it was out of this world incredible. 47 years later I am still enthralled with the way beautiful women look in hosiery. I buy my own now and get off in them .

This was very intense with a build up that held me on edge and had me hard as hell.

Wow i hope you have more

truly great .

As always, Jasmine, you are a crowd-pleaser with this continuation of your history of writing such attractive stories.

Thank You for the ride...now on to "Nana" and her joining the fun!!

**5** Stars, as always!

Fantastic.

Thhis was a fun story with mom and son desiring the same result and ad nana too. I can’t wait until the follow up story. Will it have surprise events. I bet so knowing your passion for the hot, sexy, and unexpected. Bring it on!

Wow! Just beginning to know the author. Made Jasmine one of my fabs.

Thoroughly enjoyable story. Logically de eloped story line. The only minor fault I find with this story is the initial lack of communication and strengthening of the mother/son relationship. The husband has been dead for 2 years. During this 2 year period, they have only each other to depend on. The son seems mature and apparently stepped up and assumed some duties on his own without being told. I do not understand why they could not discuss why they like/enjoy each others company. After the son discovered his mother's wants and/or needs, based on working on her computer, why could he not attempt to discuss the situation with er? If she shut him down/refused to discuss her needs, then his chosen course of action is appropriate because he loves, respects, and adores her.

Jasmine you are a fabulous author. This story burned my psyche. I think I suffer from the Oedipus Complex myself. Gotta get Nana as hot & horny as Mom is. I know you will. 😘😘😘

Am perplexed

Average. Too long for the pleasure of reading it.

Bill S.

A bit goofy but quite unique. Well done.

Great story. I did have a problem with it. As I read I like to place myself in the story. This time I didn't know if I should be the mother or son. Maybe in the second part I'll be Nana.

Think I'll go fuck my wife's ass this morning!!

I'm loving all of your stories! But but I especially enjoyed this one! I'm new to "Lit." I am looking forward to reading more of them! Thank you!

Dumb and totally made up

Great story

I love all of your stories.

What could have been far-fetched seems very real, loved it.

Ask always LOVE yr story and thx for sharing……I’d take a young one to pretend they were my child def male or female (dd or son) such fun! Xx

Absolutely fannytastic !!!!!

Terrific Story. !!!!!!!!

Amazing story. Brilliant characters and plot. Will there be more chapters in this series? 5 Stars.

ABSOLUTELY FUCKIN AWESOME...

Its hot.

Not really illustrated as suggested.

Nice!

excellent and between you and me.....illus. are nice but not necessary for me, just saying. Well done.

And I say again...SSL strikes another chord for those of us who love this kind of thing!!!!! 💞💞💞💞💞. You have such a way with your thoughts, and share them so nicely with us!! Thank You!!

The "open line" on the phone call...absolute genius...and a real possibility, as many have found out. Plus, that 'Nana' is a submissive also is a boon for Simon...he is gonna have a full dance card soon!!

Five**5**Stars...deserving of many more!!

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Damned 5 stars isn't enough. Wonderful story and characters. Loved the plot. Thanks for your work!

Love your stories. So hot, so well written, so well thought out. Never fails to make me rock hard. 5/5