by CrazyTimesAHappenin
Hi, I almost put dislike but the story is too good and too promising
but i feel it's again one of those story's with multiple 1 page a day
So conflicted. I often prefer 1 page stories because if they're well written, you can accomplish what's needed in that length. So I was happy to see it was 1 page but man, I was left hanging at the end. Some minor issues with either editing or keyboarding but overall, a nice chapter 1.
This is an exact copy of a story already posted to the site. I read it days ago.
no incest in this, in case you didn't know incest has to have sex, there was none. one star
Love the story though this first part is a little short.
Look forward to part two
Good start. We’ll written. But couldn’t give you a 5 do to the lack of sex. Looking forward to chapter 2
This is a very great start. Looking forward to reading the rest of the story.
Chapter 2 is just waiting for approval from the Literotica gate keepers. Hopefully today.
Pure "Seminal moment" that so many fathers overtly dream of.