All Comments on 'Incestuous Surprises'

At first I thought that this was another story of incest rape, pregnancy, and revenge. I was totally unprepared for the karma twist in the latter portion...unknowingly benefitting from incest. Great stiory!

Good concept, but the characters talk waaay too much, especially during sex. A lot of that could be internalized by describing their thoughts. The descriptions of abuse during sex was very off-putting.

Some of the talking was all 1 person so it was like listening to 1/2 a phone call besides that it was really good

a shame it ended so soon.

Good story.

EXCELLENT!!!

What more can I say, one of the best erotic incestuous stories I have had the pleasure of reading.

Pretty good story with a good cast of characters. I suspect that you, the author, have a strong penchant for chubby protagonists with a demonstrated fondness for anal copulation. The narrative between Stan & Lori was unrealistic, repetitive and stilted. In the initial sex scene, and given Lori's previous sexual abuses, she unrealistically showed absolutely no resistance or reluctance to immediately engage. Now, Lori claimed that she had never seen a penis, yet was married, had been gang banged and also blew Arty. Did these people not have dicks? I know that she supposedly had her eyes closed the whole time but, come on. Also, the past tense for thrust is thrust and not thrusted . . . .

Great story please continue writing it make a part 2 her relationship is so heartwarming and loving and the character’s are so relatable