by Handley_Page
I'd like to believe that this is what actually happens. Great story!
This is a lovely story. I try to write realistic tales about normal people, but with twists. I am very glad that someone else does the same, but does it better.
Ta.
Nice story HP.
Nice length and exposition.
HEA ending, not bad for a romance;-)
Very neat story! Well told! It's the first of yours that I've read, and I'll read more. The story line is really interesting! Neat the way you have the ending work out!!
Nice work and great story. I really enjoyed it. It moved along really good and was freaky.
Very hard to believe this was your first story. One you can truly be proud of. Good luck in the contest.
DG Hear
I agree this is a winner. Very creepy and spooky and so well written. I really enjoyed reading it and good luck in the contest.
Although the competition is still running I think that this is the winner.It is a well crafted and original story.