by Nexte100
I sure don’t want to wait 10 days for the next installment.
Another great chapter!
Your presentation of Adam is excellent. A character like this could easily come across as a douche or a creep, but you keep him sympathetic, largely because of his inner turmoil over Ella. Who, incidentally, is another fine creation.
You've definitely got the chops to go pro. (The final section alone is proof enough of that.) If, indeed, you haven't already.
Well I suppose it wasn't a surprise there are other incubi, but I think it would have been better if it was just the MC learning about his abilities on his own, as he continues to fuck whomever he can and build a harem or whatever. But that's just me.