All Comments on 'Incubus Pupa Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Just getting better.

I sure don’t want to wait 10 days for the next installment.

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 5 years ago
A very good chapter!

And very yummy too! Thank you!

Imperator_9Imperator_9almost 5 years ago
Outstanding!

Another great chapter!

Your presentation of Adam is excellent. A character like this could easily come across as a douche or a creep, but you keep him sympathetic, largely because of his inner turmoil over Ella. Who, incidentally, is another fine creation.

You've definitely got the chops to go pro. (The final section alone is proof enough of that.) If, indeed, you haven't already.

PJCGPJCGover 3 years ago

A little bit expected. Still okay

wicked62wicked62over 3 years ago

6'4"? Really. Good story other than that.

adtroupeadtroupeabout 3 years ago
Height

Hey wicked, I'm 6'4 in real life. So really. 6'4.

MarkT63MarkT63about 2 years ago

Wonder if Adam grew taller also?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well I suppose it wasn't a surprise there are other incubi, but I think it would have been better if it was just the MC learning about his abilities on his own, as he continues to fuck whomever he can and build a harem or whatever. But that's just me.

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Update - 16 June 2023 So, for those of you out there still following me, possibly hoping for a continuation of one of my stories, I have good news. I've been working on the fourth installment of Sweet Jonathan, which will be the last in that series. It was always my intent...

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