by Desiguy69
Nicely told story. There are a couple of very minor items that should be caught while proof reading. Example is: Her title were so big ' tits (plural) goes with were so big. Had you written tit (singular) was so big would be appropriate.
... as close of a look would usually be written as close as look . . .
This is your first essay I believe I have read. The context is good, pace ideal and length, in my opinion, is excellent. Some stories go on and on ad nauseum.
Please continue, wether telling us about sex with your Mom or with a few really cute/beautiful sexy hirls/women.
Nice story but would have liked more foreplay and no condom. I very much prefer raw bare sex.