by ArousedIndianW
The plays and fun between both is wondeful....
Would love more kink....
Try to include the sister too....
Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your stories
Wow, loved the sneaky sex between the guy and his SIL. This was a hot story. Hope you will continue this story where other spouses join and make it a full swap or hot foursome sex. Me and my husband, we both love Indian sex stories and yours was one of the best ones we have read.
Lt. Col Custer aroused some Indians once. It did not end well, neither did this story.
And probably a lot more likely than most of the revenge/retribution stories or subservience/submission stories we see here on Loving Wives.
Neither his wife nor her husband apparently have any inkling of the sexual liaison going on between Mahima and Viki. It's what happens with many (most?) adulterous situations in real life.
Unfortunately, for a story, a lot of the excitement in infidelity comes from the guilt and naughtiness of it and the possibility of being discovered. So I felt that this story was a bit lacking in that aspect. As I said in a comment to Ch.01, Mahima's husband doesn't even get a mention, let alone suspect anything.
If these first two chapters were indeed based on a situation that actually happened, as Mrs AIW said at the beginning of the first chapter, perhaps the next chapter can wander off into a bit more fictional excitement and look into the emotions of the characters rather than just the physical contact between our wife and her brother-in-law.
Lue
Would be worthwhile to have Vicky come over to Mahima’s home for a few days and get her pregnant.
Superb follow up to a great start. Now time to get ridhi and your hubby involved as well. Kisi ka kam jyada nahi hona chahiye
Nothing looked out of reality, though I would make more stories about the coming months rather than rushing the months in one paragraph.
May be other acts and such, your writing is good.
Wow this was really nice.. hope to see more stories from you in near future.. keep it up:)
Bring cuckoldry twist to this or have Vicky share Mahima with his old friends
Enjoyed reading both chapters. What I liked particularly was the slow build up to the tryst - very sensual and in no hurry, the excellent writing skills and the sheer eroticism of the sexual acts themselves. Almost as if I was a voyeur sitting there and watching the events unfold.
Totally loved it
ForestLover
Love the story and the buildup. Looking forward to another sequel…. Maybe in Mahimas home.
You see i have read many stories for years now... I am a man who from childhood was in erotic stuff... I enjoy the essence of sex... Sex is not just a rhythmic penetration.. It is sensual too.... I was once in a relationship with my teacher when i was 15.... You literally gave flashbacks of that time.... What the heck she has blocked me and now i can't talk with her.... But your story... It was too erotic
Would have been interesting if she caught them or mentioned when she left something like: "Thanks for taking good care of my husband when I couldn't" with a wink of something.
Awesome writing....every action between them is replica of my .....doing me when my Mather in law was sick......chennaishobs
The first chapter was brilliant - not sure can say the same about the second. Would have been fun for it to have been a true continuation of the pace you built in the first with an ending suggesting his wife knew about it all along or something.
Gorgeous lusty behaviour of both of you specially fucking both holes together as I love it as well .
Thank you so much for the wonderful story and narration of every minute details. All the erotic places needed to have sex have been mentioned.
I was expecting the sister to have noticed the action and that the story would be thressome from there on..