All Comments on 'Indian Wife & Construction Guys Ch. 05.5'

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sweetdreamsssssweetdreamssssover 5 years ago
That's a bittersweet ending to the story

Do think the bully story will be like this ? The wife leaving to USA with the bullys baby and the husband has no clue ?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

very nice end..

teh nukkad and lallan needs some closures too

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Great....story......

Really loved it and fast updates.....hope you also end the social worker and the bully story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice ending

It was what it was, a sexual exploration and expansion of avenues. The reveal that purva is the alpha in the relationship is extraordinary. The psychology of that relationship is now clear.

However, I also expected some closure regarding the other affairs as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Refreshing spin

Great story. Please complete the chapter for your bully story on what happened in the truck 😁

vinay694vinay694over 5 years ago
Thanks for ending

I love your writing and the pace of your stories but particularly this series is annoying and got no matter. I hate single page stories but this is misery. Thanks for ending. Come back strong and continue with Indian Social worker story.

arch3rarch3rover 5 years ago

Loved the story and a great end.

Please write more stories, you are one of the best!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Please continue with social worker and bully

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
why sudden ending? Write Different New Story

The story required a line which should not be crossed. Your writing was good, you keep it in line avoiding Bullshit gang bang or Public scenes. You write it interestingly. so I dont understand why you end it suddenly? you can have write2-3 parts more.

Anyways you can write a new story of your own.

satabdisatabdiover 5 years ago
Lovely

I support all the comments made by other readers. However now please publish a multi chapter basis family saga with servants also in which family members will marry their servants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice story pls continue

I always like to have such stories with Hindu Muslim n religious..m it give me boost n tickles... Even I sex with intercaste sex.. it's really enjoyable... Pls keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
ok ok

shiprat can do better than this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Nice end to a story from a women point of view.

Well written and planned

densecarnaldesiresdensecarnaldesiresover 5 years ago
Loved it

been a huge fan of yours since ages. this series is right there at the top in my books.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Next up: who watches watchmen

I believe you and aurelius1982are same person. Y’all writing style is exactly same. But that doesn’t matter. I like your thinking style and how you put it in a story. Great job.

If you are looking for your next subject, may I suggest, re-write who watches watchmen from Dara’s Perspective.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hats off

Mind blowing...

Keep it up..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
please

please continue the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue The story please

Please shiprat continue it's More erotic and emotional one lovely

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Shiprat or Shipra T.... may your cunt forever be filled with muslim cum... hope u become a 10 rupee whore in a muslim ghetto getting fucked day in day out in a dinghy room covered with betel spit and cum stains.. hope you die alone in a disgusting place buried nameless with a legacy of having been a breeding cow

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Next part please may be from where original author left t.also add embarrassed situation and humiliation scenario nice interfaith mature story.... Please continue add more parts

abdtiresiasabdtiresiasalmost 2 years ago

This spinoff is one of my favorite novels on this site. I think it's fortunate that the protagonist escapes the temptation to live as Sajid's wife, and returns to her original self-life. (Of course, I know that you have no choice but to connect with the original story.) But on the other hand, I succumbed to my desire to be with Sajid, choose the life of a low-class wife, and regret it, but get trapped in that life. , I want to see other upper-class women's stories. Or what if a foreigner from a non-Indian country, seduced by Sajid, ends up living the life of a low-class Indian wife (which she never even imagined)?

indian_exec2000indian_exec2000about 1 year ago

Excellent story. Great ending. Do write more stories narrated by women. However, the upper class Hindu woman falling for the boorish, dirty lower class Muslim man theme has been flogged to death by now, by many authors. I look forward to reading original themes from your talented pen. Ciao!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Dear Author,

Please write "Who Watches The Watchmen" from Dara's perspective. How he felt while having a fling with a high class memsaab like menaka.

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A typical atypical Indian woman. My stories, entirely fictional, explore some dark and disturbing fetishes of mine. Infidelity, humiliation, abuse, cuckolding, and playing with taboos related to social status and age. These are just dark fantasies meant for entertainment purpo...