by ShareIndianWife
The story seems to be based on time and situation happening during course of life. So far the story-line and the narration is progressing with a grip. Hopefully the same continues in the similar manner.
Thanks.
So many couples face it every day in so many parts of the world - sex sells.
Ignore the haters. This is gold. Keep going with 10 chapters and post them soon.
Wow what a set up. Wish it was longer. Cant wait to read more!
One of the best first chapters I have ever read. I hope you are not planning to give up.
This story shows promise of exciting things to come. Hope it does not get rushed however.
It was a great start... please post further chapters
Waitimg for nrxt chapter.. everyday checking
★★★★★ [5 (4.75 /5=6)]!
In my book, a good Ch. 1 is an intro which gives the readers an idea what to expect in future chapters.
In Ch. 1 the husband gives his ultra sexy wife a legally-binding three-month hall pass. In his heart, in his mind, he is, painfully and shamefully, already sharing her with some very appealing studs. He is doing that because he loves his wife not only 'truly madly deeply,' but also 'unconditionally and selflessly.'
By the time the husband was aked to sign the "hall pass" he must have have felt like the proverbial rabbit in caught headlight.
Re Anonymous 3 months ago
"★★★★★ [5 (4.75 /5=6)]!"
In my opinion above anon hit the nail on the head with their description of the emotions and thoughts that occupied his hert and his had when he realized he would no longer have the exclusive righrs to his wife's body.
(Posted July 15 2021)