All Comments on 'Indian Wife Becomes Model Ch. 01'

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Harsh61Harsh61over 5 years ago
Desperate Time.

The story seems to be based on time and situation happening during course of life. So far the story-line and the narration is progressing with a grip. Hopefully the same continues in the similar manner.

Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
just more garbage thrown into LW

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Classic Situation

So many couples face it every day in so many parts of the world - sex sells.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Excellent

Ignore the haters. This is gold. Keep going with 10 chapters and post them soon.

tt16tt16over 5 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Beautiful story

Wow what a set up. Wish it was longer. Cant wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Really great start!

One of the best first chapters I have ever read. I hope you are not planning to give up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
want more....

Damn good story man, continue it.

TJB76TJB76over 5 years ago
Perfect start

Hope you are planning to post the next chapter very soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good potential

This story shows promise of exciting things to come. Hope it does not get rushed however.

CrazyforlbCrazyforlbabout 5 years ago
Next chapter please

Next chapter please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Next chapter please.... eagerly waiting

It was a great start... please post further chapters

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Why the delay?

Will there ever be further chapters???

redhikerredhikerabout 5 years ago
Continue!

Loved it, Pls Continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Waitimg for nrxt chapter.. everyday checking

Waitimg for nrxt chapter.. everyday checking

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
KLPD?

Chapter 1 so long ago...

Chapter 2... when?

26thNC26thNCover 4 years ago
Time

Take your time dawg. Indian porn is like the water, it'll make you sick.

CrazyforlbCrazyforlbover 4 years ago
Next episode please

Next episode please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Next Episode

When is next episode????

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Next episode

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

★★★★★ [5 (4.75 /5=6)]!

In my book, a good Ch. 1 is an intro which gives the readers an idea what to expect in future chapters.

In Ch. 1 the husband gives his ultra sexy wife a legally-binding three-month hall pass. In his heart, in his mind, he is, painfully and shamefully, already sharing her with some very appealing studs. He is doing that because he loves his wife not only 'truly madly deeply,' but also 'unconditionally and selflessly.'

By the time the husband was aked to sign the "hall pass" he must have have felt like the proverbial rabbit in caught headlight.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (five)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Re Anonymous 3 months ago

"★★★★★ [5 (4.75 /5=6)]!"

In my opinion above anon hit the nail on the head with their description of the emotions and thoughts that occupied his hert and his had when he realized he would no longer have the exclusive righrs to his wife's body.

(Posted July 15 2021)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What is wrong with you.. this has high potential.. take it forward

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