All Comments on 'Indian Wife Longs for Motherhood Ch. 01'

Excellent Writing!!

Exceptionally well written by one with a good command over English. The plot has been weaved nicely and the situations have come out of the bag in surprises. I have ignored the usage of the local language as requested by the author(s) which is too insignificant to be a hindrance. In any case, I find that translations have been provided alongside. I am sure the second chapter would be equally engrossing when it does come out. Don't delay its publication. Thank you.

Wonderful to read your stories and very glad that you are back. Was wondering when you share again since I was checking for updates regularly

Keep posting your stories, please

You have good command on language and have written well. The build up and the teasing was very nicely handled. I am sure the next part will be still better. I wish you had added some more oomph and aah in the actual sex scene. Do try but be careful not to make it mechanical. Adding a few more dialogs and emotions would raise this to real high level.

waiting eagerly to see how Asha succumbs to the onslaught of Chachaji.

This is an incredibly hot story. The mock uncle's perversions have been nicely brought out. The promise of a second chapter is encouraging. Wish it would be posted early and the author wouldn’t make us impatient. There is an underlying expectation that the female character, Asha, would be able to fulfill her fantasy in what will follow.

Truly Arousing story- the manner in which Ashmita - Slowly subtly brings out the change in Asha from Reluctance - fear- to enjoying getting aroused sub consciously wanting more has to be commended.

The story has depth it certainly Titillates .

Looking forward to part B Hopefully it will be Asha who will now be the eager , willing wanting wanton women.

Beautifully written

Well written and very hot story. Waiting to see what follows at the temple and and whether Asha is successful in her efforts at pregnancy.

It's always wonderful to read the stories penned by you. You have a good command over the English language and I feel you possess the talent of erotic storytelling. That said, I have been waiting for the next chapter of this series since long now. I hope we will get to read the next chapter soon

Very erotic. Wish you would post the next chapter as early as possible. Already it is overdue. Gave you a 5 but you deserve more.

Loved this story. Must read all your publications here in Lit. You have a style that is unique.

Till now all good but can be even better,wating for second part More humiliation can be aadded,and punishment can be added

Dear Ashmitaji please continue this story i am so eagar to read next part

Loved this story, eagerly waiting for the next part to see more of ashas exhibitionism and how uncle makes her succumb to him. Excellent writing

Loved the Story eagerly waiting for next part….!

Please continue and update soon, I always look forward to erotica from you.

Where is part 2. The real penetration??