All Comments on 'Indian Wife Swarna Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Another author that hates Indians

And thinks nothing of portraying them as being dumber than rocks.

1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
good build up

good builid up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Great build up

Hopefully the story continues at the same pace and no rushed crazy stuff. Would be nice to describe her body more in details

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Prabas

First part's description of her body and thirst was much more is sexier. Wished they didn't get intimate so early. Teasing and lust would have been more appropriate for now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Beautiful! All it needs is continuos persistent encouragement in the right direction from the husband who needs to be completed committed.

The story is an excellent idea to convert an uptight Asian conservative wife to a Hot Wife and really enjoy life to its full content.

Asian Indian women must understand nearly all woman 99% including their mother and sister have enjoyed and are enjoying outside marriage. It is perfectly fine. Only nobody talks about it openly like in the Western world.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
★★★★ (four stars)! The story is (a) erotic & (b) true to life. Swarna won't be faithful, but her husband will be better of than many husbands because Swarna can make two men happy.

In my book Swarna is a keeper. Full stop.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I rated the first 2 parts as 5 stars but this as 3 stars,as because the story isn't bad,but it was more hot reading it from the 1st person narrative rather than 3rd person. Please let Swarna write from a 1st person narrative and make her wear sexy dressers like very low saree and skimpy blouse with lots of south indian jewellery

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Really true to life.

I love Desi erotic stories.

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