All Comments on 'Indian Yoni Puja with Mother Ch. 02'

Finally, an Indian story worth reading... doing great, dude!

You've taken a lot of care to put the story together- and it shows!

type, for pete sake TYPE... i wanna hear the rest! Nice job.

u rock bro

need to describe about mothers nude buttock. in indian mother son based story moms butt is the most attract thing to son.

Very good development of the story

I normally disdain the mingling of culture with erotica but this is so well done! The religious overtones and the innocence portrayed make me come back to this again and again.

nice story . so hot

Damn that was very eventful and descriptive. Plot was interesting along with the premise and characters. Excellent writing and I can't wait to read more

Yoni Puja? Sounds like an ice cream flavor, or the name for one of those "My Little Pony" characters. Be honest, you're making up words, right? I'd avoid any language where "Yoni Puja" is used in a sexual situation. "She was leaking fluids from her yoni puja." "Scalpel... spreader... suture... yoni puja... scalpel..." "I walked into the bathroom without knocking, and he was taking a yoni puja!"

Seriously? If I see story titles or descriptions that tip me off the author is going to use words like "yoni puja", I'm going to skip them. (Unless the worlds sound SO funny that I have to comment. Yoni Puja? Get the fuck out!)