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The next two weeks are spent preparing for the wedding. Finally, the day of the ceremony comes. Bradly's friends and family arrive, and although initially shocked, especially by his appearance, couldn't be happier that he had finally found true love. He promises to occasionally call them on the satellite phone, but informs them that he will be spending the remainder of his life in the village with Inee, the most beautiful girl in the world.
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Bradly had found love in the strangest of places. Just like that he left behind his rough life in the states, for the simple one that he had only dreamed of a few weeks ago. Inee would eventually become fluent in English and Spanish, and Bradly would become fluent in her language. He would often share stories about his life back home, and although he did occasionally long for home, he phoned back frequently, even letting his friends and family talk to Inee, who told them they were welcome to visit any time. Bradly would live out the rest of his life in the village. It had been his destiny to become one them.
- COMMENTS
exhultantabout 3 years agoWhy would a civilised guy settle for life with a hot young native girl. They are two a penny, & sex is available most places. He must have settled for her because her pussy was the best he had enjoyed.
Otherwise I followed your writing & deem it well worth reading.
Thanks for your story.
Stopokochacover 5 years agoAuthorApparently not. Well, spell check just shows me if I spelled it correctly, not whether I used the correct word.
I know. I could 've made the ending better, but it was already too long, and I wanted to get it out. And I figured people would lose interest after the sex part anyways. I wanna make this into a full length book.
Anonymousover 5 years agoUse a spell checker in the future. It will make your stories more believable and enjoyable. Also, your ending was anti-climactic.
Stopokochacover 5 years agoAuthorAh shit, really? I looked up how to spell feedle and that's what it showed. There are words I know, but never write. And I thought I corrected all the waist bands. Maybe I missed some, or msybe my edited version didn't save, which it sometimes doesn't.
I'm truly surprised because I went over it like three times and was super careful to change everything. But with such a large story it's easy to miss something. At least you pointed them out. I appreciate it. I'll be more careful next time. My spellings still not as bad as the Indian stories. lol
Was the sex good though?
ReiDeBastosover 5 years agoI assume that you meant "fetal" position (curled up like a fetus), and "waist"band (waist = midsection, waste = trash). You misused "waste" (meaning "waist") several times. There were other errors, but these are the ones I remember.
