by yowser
You have an excellent flair for using written works few, if any, have read, so this was a ravenously consumed story for someone starving for it. Judging by dates, this narrator could easily be Faustus or an "unemployed" Mephistopheles, so I'm curious to learn where you're headed with it. Ο διάβολος βρίσκεται στις λεπτομέρειες
I've been watching your submissions for "Infernal Folio Ch 02" and I almost missed this story because it it doesn't have the expected title. I'm curious why you opted to isolate the two chapters (soon three apparently) as separate works. You said right at the beginning that the previous story ought to be read first. I'm guessing a similar note will preceed "Bound to Know" (Clever pun).
Anyway, a nice continuation. I think I preferred reading Sophy's point of view, but I can see how Fausto's was necessary here. I look forward to the revelation of what is actually going on here. You're teasing us with this story in the same way Fausto kept Sophy teetering on the edge for so long, and I'm getting as desperate for release.
Hey I've read a lot of books, not all sexual, and this one stands out uniqiely. I just want to say that ur writing style/the voice here is well done and interesting
A story to be read backwards and forward... truly outstanding work in all directions. Crisp, intriguing writing. What a wonderful addition to the tales of Erotic Literature!