All Comments on 'Infidelity Revisited Ch. 03'

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ineedsomedrugsnowineedsomedrugsnowabout 17 years ago
Great stuff!

I love all of these stories -- she really appreciates his big donger and her tan little feet are hot - keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
excellent story telling

This is excellent writing and story telling. Those who complain about there being too much eroticism in the story completely fail to understand the author's purpose, or how the erotic element is not only integral to the plot but an essential part of it. In point of fact the erotic element in this chapter is exactly in the right proportion, perfectly intertwined with the rest of the plot in a compelling drama well worth reading. Five stars.

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