by CulticTerror
This is my first erotica and the first story I’ve actually written for people to read publicly. It is very much inspired by and essentially my own take on Barker Tree’s “The Infinity Device” which I highly recommend even despite being to this day (sadly) incomplete.
I would absolutely love to know your thoughts on the story, be it critique, comments, questions, or just saying that you enjoyed it, it really means a lot
I'd love to see how this story might continue, I see great promise in the theme that you have chosen. Well written.
You have an interesting start that has possibilities of being an incredible story. This first chapter is lacking required backstory but being as short as it is, that can be considered normal as well as being corrected in the second chapter which should be long enough to accomplish that goal. I applaud your efforts i this first story attempt and it is very good for a first posting. I look forward to see how the story grows as well as how you grow as an author. Thanks for posting your story.
Just for anyone wondering, yes there is definitely more, chapter 2-3 should be up soon 4-5 not long after