All Comments on 'Inherit My Heart Ch. 03'

I'll admit, I was like Chase - wondering who this girl really is. It did seem a little surprising that she was so extremely confident, from the backless red dress, to the 4" FM heels, leading him to the car, ordering for them both (the Sangria). However, it can also be seen as her feeling more comfortable with him, and able to let more of her true personality show through.<br><br>

As to Chase just up and walking out, what was that about? Couldn't he explain why he wasn't comfortable taking her virginity? Instead, he totally left her in an embarrassing position!

Fantastic read! Can't wait for the rest!

i love it so far i'll be waiting on pins for more..keep posting....

Nice Twists and turns. Very interesting end to chapter 3 can't wait for Chapter 4

Oh wow, I'm so happy you're back to writing. I loved this chapter and can't wait for more.

I'm really enjoying this story. I love how you've allowed Elizabeth to be a fully developed personality. She's not just a "good" girl, but a woman with all of the ticks and foibles that come from being a real person. And, Chase's character is actually pretty funny, if you think about it. Here's Mr. Rockstar, who gets women throwing themselves at him all the time, yet he freaks and runs when he discovers Elizabeth's a virgin...too cute! More, please?

Please keep writing... this story is amazing! I can only imagine how rejected she will feel at him pulling away, and all the wrong things she'll read into it. And I don't want to have to imagine it - I want to read it!

Another great chapter.