All Comments on 'Inheritance Pt. 03'

This was another fantastic chapter right up till you ended the story. Shit man this could have gone on for ages I absoloutely loved it so please rethink your decision to finish it. Oh and ignore fukin idiots like happymuffin because they are just fukin morons with no talent to do anything themselves so just hate on people like you who have a real talent.

Great story. Wish it was longer but know you've got a few stories on going and wanting to do new ones look forward to more.

Well done. 5!

Damn fine story, loved it.

Welcome back 5

That seemed rushed big time

Quite a fun romp.

I enjoyed it. No surprise that Richard remained truer to character, but I wondered why he didn’t go after Linda’s bookstore…. I don’t know whether most insurance companies would pay on a claim involving arson, they try to worm out of anything they can avoid. On a minor note near the end you referenced ‘H3’, while earlier you used ‘helium 3’. Helium 3 is a big player in fusion research, the shorthand would be’He3’. Otherwise, a really nice job with this one.

Great story. I enjoyed every chapter.

wonderful story so well told I felt like I was a part of it. Thank you for sharing.

I enjoyed this story. Thank you.

Fantastic finish. 5 stars

Long time, no stories. Glad you wrapped up a story, after 4 years... Even after the long wait this ending seemed rushed and without your usual twists and turns. Still so well written I gave it a 5.

The ending seems like it was slapped together. Otherwise 5 stars. DMW aka Sumnut96

Awesome as usual. Always look forward to see your work pop up here. Thanks again for sharing your work. 5 stars!!!

That seemed rushed

An excellent story!

A fitting conclusion to this series!

I really enjoy reading your stories and hope you will create more like these!

First I want to say that I love your stories you are one of my top ten favorite authors. I will have to agree that the story felt rushed, however it was still nice that we got some closer for this story. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work whether it be finishing existing, continuing, or new stories. Thank you for all your work.

Well done

Good one.

Thanks, really glad you finished this story..

A pleasure to read and enjoy! Thank you for writing and sharing this story!

Way to rushed

Glad to see you back on here.

Another great story from a fantastic writer pleas keep them coming and add more to ones already posted. I hope you can bring back the ones that some moron at lit took down. Happy writing to you a big fan

It could have been better written seemed kind of rushed to end this story. Kind of sad to waste such a good platform.

The story had grand promise - I hope you look back and do a re-write in the years to come. It reminds me of my college years - my senior papers were bad because I was just sick of school. I hope you find your muse again, as you do have talent!

Loved this story sexual it was a little rushed and the ending as well there should have been more of how his mother became pregnant and Briana as well the ending was too rushed 5 stars

Excellent series. I thought Jesse and Janice were more conpatible and was kind of hoping they would get together. Still excellent. 5 stars

I agree with Muskeyboys comments ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Great story I was hoping it would be a bit longer but then I'm greedy. Any chance of more of the Pharoahs Curse it's my favourite of all your great story's.

god i wish this was longer than 3 chapters. that's how much I enjoyed this story.

What an excellent story, thoroughly enjoyed it.

Often, when story segments are gapped over a lengthy period of time, the flow of the originating chapters becomes disturbed. I’m pleased to say that it didn’t happen in this case. I do feel that there were a lot of substantiating details that had been omitted. This story, on the whole, is driven by the sexual content and underlying story. Your characters weren’t given enough depth in order for this reader to feel any significant emotion towards any of them, except for Greta, and a little towards Jesse. I usually revisit stories that touch me on some level, but this won’t be one of them.

A dam good story.

Thank you for finishing this great story.