Inhuman - Reaped Pt. 02

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I giggled, a random memory flitting through my sleep riddled mind. "Remember when Jake asked if I was going to sleep with you?"

~"You never explained that phrase. I do not sleep, though I will lie here with you while you sleep because I like this."~

"Technically, we just slept together twice. No sleeping involved. It's a euphemism for sex."

~"That makes no sense."~

I shrugged, unable to come up with a way to make it make sense. I guess he wasn't wrong. Just before I let myself fall into the abyss, I ask, "Come back if you have to go?"

~"Of course."~ His hand soothes me into a near sleep, and just as I drop off, I hear him say, ~"I will never leave you, love."~

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RedMonkeyButtRedMonkeyButtalmost 2 years agoAuthor

@anon: I do agree it was abrupt. I’ll admit I wanted to see what would happen when he took it off. I wrote it and didn’t know what would happen. That’s why it was abrupt. It was added on to give them some personal time and because I was curious what I would come up with. *only slightly ashamed*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved this, so sweet. Though I did think it a little abrupt that all of a sudden he was fine with taking off his robe. !maybe could have used just a bit !ore of a transition?

RedMonkeyButtRedMonkeyButtover 2 years agoAuthor

Yes. Unfortunately this is all I’ve written that’s readable for the reapers. I've got a few pieces, including one where Charos is asking about Becca’s toy because he didn’t just show up in her room at first. He showed up during personal time. The word phallus was used a lot. But it didn’t really fit with this because I couldn’t move past it. Writing with Moira as a main voice was fun, but her moira wouldn’t come to me so I was stuck with bad hogwarts jokes about the robes. Trying to write another reaper was just depressing when they walk around a battlefield and find their moira simply because the soul doesn’t reach back. This is the version that stuck and actually worked, and it fits in my Inhuman universe.

I’m so glad y’all like it! This was difficult to keep light while still keeping the soul aspect serious. Thanks for all the comments! *creepy internet hugs*

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53over 2 years ago

Excellent. Need more chapters

ReddladyReddladyover 2 years ago

Wait, only a 2-part story..... Ugh I'm saddened now.

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