All Comments on 'Ink My Heart, Pen My Soul Ch. 04'

by AfroEroChubbiez

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

*SCREAMS* I AM SO EXCITED YOU UPDATED THISSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *passes out*

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Cool

Nice but let's not go over the top ( "a thoughtful satin scarf left on the edge of the tub's vanity. " lol!) And why do these BBWs always have "tiny hands"?

AfroEroChubbiezAfroEroChubbiezalmost 9 years agoAuthor
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Hey Guys! Glad everyone is keeping up, I am writing the next chapter in between life events so it will be up soon! To answer those responses: My Hubby grew up with black girls and is married to one. When we travel, he reminds ME about my bonnet. The Marcus character is based off him. So that isn't a weird stretch, because even my teenaged brother knows a natural woman needs a scarf at night. As for the tiny hands, I'm BBW, my best friend is, and my momma. We all have small hands. All big girls don't have sausage fingers. Then again, even if they were chubby fingers, they could still be small. The description "Small" is size connotation, not fat content. Anyways, I love the feedback guys, thanks so much. Feel free to ask me questions or request explanations any time! Thank you!

sblazer227sblazer227over 8 years ago
Love this story

This is a rare gem on literotica. I love everything about this story including the headscarf (cause its a necessity)

Tinab123Tinab123almost 8 years ago
Thank You for writing

I am a total fan. I loved these 4 chapters. I will continue to look for your work in future.

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