All Comments on 'Ink, Sex, Magic Pt. 03'

Dude... You should write a non-taboo version of this and pitch it the CW as a new TV show. I'd watch it.

Ditto

I do love those beautiful piles of plaid called the Winchesters...

I'm seconding that this is really book/tv show worthy. You are an imaginative and descriptive writer. I hope we get to read more stories from you!

Although your stories are amazing, this one lacked full complete sex scenes. The bondage scene started out really good but I didn't enjoy the fact it didn't finish. Just something to keep in mind. Keep writing ! I love your stories and writing style.

Thank you for you feedback, PrincessxCherry. You're definitely right about the bondage scene. I wanted to flesh that out more when I was writing it (literally) so I might go back and do so, at least for my own gratification.

The complexities of your tale keeps me captivated; I enjoy her growth in magic and personal strength. Alice makes a good heroine.

As you write your writing and storytelling improves. The latest installment was very good. Please keep writing this tale!

I'm so impressed by your magnificent writing style! As I was reading this latest installment, I realized at the end that I had easily been picturing the scenes playing out in my mind.For me,that only comes when I'm reading the best of the best. It seems like u really have a lot of talent and I honestly can't wait to see what's next!No doubt five star material👏👏⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐👏👏👏

Sincerely,Nikkisthabest

Damn! I am so entranced with this story! I would love to see this in book form!!

. . . that I'm seeing the very best of your writing and then it gets better. I think I'm witnessing some very real talent evolving here. Bloody well done!

all this magic stuff...not into bugga bugga, or religion, or fantasy...

I have always enjoyed fantasy, vampire and beasts.

May I say, im dead impressed so far and really keen to see the rest. shall look out for your other works also. Well done for you are exceedingly talented.

Great job, thanks for sharing your work.