All Comments on 'Ink, Sex, Magic Pt. 04'

The way you incorporate the tale of Alice in Wonderland keep up the awesome writing.

I really loved this story until Sylas....

I have been reading a number of different authors works & I have found no one who is so creative, imaginative - she seems to easily dive into a surreal world of magic, good vs. evil, demons, yet make it so believable - makes you think these creatures really could exist. Can't wait for the next install. This story just seems to flow so effortlessly. Keep up the great work BG.

This needs to become a published work. A book, or a series of books. Easily the most creative, imaginative, and captivating work that I've read on here, and I've read 1000's of them.

I haven't the words to properly describe what I think or feel about this story. Absolutely phenomenal is only a small start!

the whole time I read I was afraid the father would cheat on her not other way around. Kind of sad that she did it

"Unbelievable!

I haven't the words to properly describe what I think or feel about this story. Absolutely phenomenal is only a small start!"

Alice is a phenomenon. She's so damn good that reading other's submissions is a downer.

brilliant!

absolutely brilliant!

magic? ye gods...

It’s ironic how she was worried her father would cheat on her and she turned out to be unfaithful one. I could do without that part of the story and without Sylas.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!