All Comments on 'Inkwell Ch. 06'

*big grin*

MMMMmmmm... wonderful chapter. Things are getting very interesting. i look forward to the next installment. *winks*

Going well; still need an editor for spelling, etc.

put the "brakes" on, not "breaks"

that sounds "fair", not "fare"

Keep up the good work.

it is dominatrix, not dominatress

and bored housewives, not board

and gets through not thru

and many misuses of to, too and two

aside from that, the story seems to be progressing well.

The editing continues: Is it ARTROPOS or ATROPOS?

Could: He could eat a horse;

Couldn't: He couldn't (could not) eat a horse;

Peek: You PEEK at the naked lady;

Peak: The PEAK of that mountain is higher than you think;

Your writing simply does not do the story justice. You are in dire need of an editor.