by NeoShade
*bright smile*
Great chapter! Loving the progression of the story.Very nice twist in which of the Fates is up to no good. *grins* Keep up the awesome writing. Looking forward to the next chapter.
For the love of the potential that this series has, please get an editor.....please.....I will make an account on here and volunteer for it if you'll let me help you...
but for the love of all that's holy, please get an editor. this one was the worst of the bunch!
I have mmore assisting to do, but I have given-up. 'Sorry about that.