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by pointdextor

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Reads rather awkwardly in the present tense – doesn't serve the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Almost made me cry when Lisa asked her brother why he hadn't gone down on her yet...

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As an author trying to break into the world of writing, I like the feedback I receive here to my stories, most of which are factual based. Several of my stories can be found on various e-book sites, including College Daze on Amazon Kindle and Smashwords