All Comments on 'Innocence Lost Ch. 03'

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Anonymousover 19 years ago

did i miss it

where is the incest

Anonymousover 19 years ago

Great Story

I really like it!

Anonymousabout 19 years ago

Losing site of the Incest part!

Fair story line with the aforementioned bad grammar and spelling. Needs a good editor to clean it up, but story line is starting to wander away from a good story of a brother and sister. get BACK TO IT! Forget the old fogey next door neighbor and this black bastard!

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Inane and childish !

How old IS this writer ?? 1* !

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