All Comments on 'Innocence Redux'

Better than the original, but you still left the irritating punctuation mistakes in.

THIS is the story that needed to be told... the "5" that was inside the slightly confusing "3" of Part 1 !

No disrespect intended, as the core story was very good... it's just that I thought there wasn't enough clarity on which portions were dream and which were reality.

Thanks for taking the time to 'tweak' it, polishing the gem that was somewhat hidden before...