by KaizerWolf
I've been waiting to see what you did with this scene, hoping it would be awesome. I was not disappointed :-)
Gabriella riding along and just loving it makes it so much better, and demonstrates a little more clearly her whole "lesbian succubus" thing. The beginnings of a more than casual connection feels much less iffy with Gaby right in the mix, too.
This was a great change and worthy of the wait. Cannot wait for the next instalment.
I liked the original scene better, but this wasn't bad. Also, we didn't he change in front of Rebecca? He is unable to control any other high emotional time but here, not even a struggle. Did I miss something?