All Comments on 'Innocent Girlfriend'

Thanks...well written

Well written agreed. I think I find the beta play a bit too on the nose, usually the best part is when the lines are blurred and a bit confused.

Fucking Hot hot hot!!! Thanks

keep it coming. great story.

First part was great, until the part after the phonecall with Riley sucking Chris. From that moment the story falls away too fast.

1st 3 pages were childish and amateurishly written. But I thought what the heck I am in this far. So I finished it. It is a real piece of crap, gave it 2 .

Loved this! Love stories about couples discovering their cuckolding / cheating fetish. Super hot. Only wish there were more details during the sex scenes but good stuff.

Great story, this one is a lot of fun. The build up for humiliation and delving into cuck in the beginning was fantastic; I couldn't read through it fast enough.

It lost some erotic tension around the phone call when Chris was fucking her. It's a great scene (like the rest of them), but once everything was on the table like that, it deflated a little bit.

Great story. It might be better if you had the two cuckolds blowing each other.

"And that's exactly what he did. Then they fell asleep in each other's arms, and he did it again the next morning."

That's your sex scene? Sorry but it's not enough by a long shot.