All Comments on 'Innocent Mom now Son's Slave Ch. 02'

This story is great !! Do you accept/consider requests or suggestions?

I enjoyed the story. I was surprised with the word, "Chhap!!" However, it fit into the story perfectly. Keep writing.

@anonymous Yes, if you have suggestions or requests please message me privately. If it fits the direction I'm going for I'll include it.

I really liked the story, but I felt I was a spectator opposed to being drawn in to the story. Watch out for tense jumping.

I like this. This is a bit more believable than the usual mother/son stuff I read on here. Her submissive nature is taking control and overcoming the conservative prudishness in her. I am eager to read more.

FFF, my best compliment; Follow...Favourite...Five Stars...well begone is already half done

Seemed a little brutal to me, but what do I know.

My bro. You do not write dialogue with character name: dialogue lines.

Have you never read a book? You say this "character said or she whispered or declared or" you describe them talking as set up for the dialogue.