by tworiversaway
It's good so far and has certainly got potential, don't overdo, it, keep it real.
Oh, and only about 5% of a cumshot comes from your balls.
these type of stories need to be done in one go. you've done a great job building up the story but now will have to start again in the next chapter with building up the tease.
I think there has to be a 2 part of the story. The 2 part can go like she gets horny while he is already hard but she is too naive in till she finally realizes that he his hard and etc
Man she need to have a big cumbath for being so nice hehe, Uncle should have a cock size similar to Dredd!
Get an editor, some of the errors were a bit distracting . Apart from that the story was a bit of fun.
This was really good, I liked that he came and she was oblivious to it all. Well done
A very nice and hot story. The plot's length is just what it should be. Never get annoyed nor frustrated. Looking forward the next part.