All Comments on 'Innocent Schoolgirl'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

this is rape. does not belong here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
eesh

bad flow, bad description... bad story. not arousing or even interesting just badly written crap. are yo twelve?

sexysmilesexysmilealmost 16 years ago
Needs an editor

and I also believe this should be categorized differently, since Amber did not give consent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Needs editing

Could be an interesting story, but it needs an editor

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
no

Um, you can't write.

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 16 years ago
Good job!

Great job! I enjoyed this!

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