All Comments on 'Insanity Plea'

I hope she gets knocked up and gives Andy a little brother or sister :)

Nicely written, with good potential to be continued!

Is this a to be continued story? There is a lot of story involving the wife and a little bit of a cliffhanger at the end that makes me think and hope it will be continued.

Much more to come, I hope!

U HAVE TO CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Just a few minor points - if she's 18 and he's 32 then the age gap is 14 years, not 12 years.

Also while a 6 year old would definitely ask lots of those questions, some of Andy's observations seemed a little too advanced for his age.

Overall I loved your writing style - a very natural flow and good timing. Your dialogue is excellent - not at all stilted or awkward.

I'm off now to read some of your other submissions - thanks for a great read.

You have to continue and yes the little lad is a bit precocious, but Remember "The Courtship of Eddy's Father"!

You can leave out most of the stuff about the wife. We can get she's a horrible bitch with a couple of paragraphs. The tone changes dramatically (and not in a good way) when she's involved.

The rest of the story is pretty hot, however. Keep it up!

Please write more!!!!!

I enjoyed reading it. Thank you. I hope there will be another chapter to this one.

PLEASE add more. I love this story and you should really add another chapter!

I'm 19 and a frequent babysitter, so hot to imagine, loved it. please continue :)

Very nice and delight reading. How young girls love to take on an older man. Happens all the time. . .and even virgins are usually the easy ones to bed. Perhaps its the little young ones that seduces the older male and yet the law says it's to protect the younger members of society. Garbage !