All Comments on 'Insatiable'

by LittleLotsOfLife

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LittleLotsOfLifeLittleLotsOfLifeover 2 years agoAuthor

This is actually my first piece of erotic literature I've ever created. I was meaning to write this for the Halloween contest, but I didn't quite find the time or the motivation to start it. But as they say, better late than never.

I'm not really sure if I'll ever make anything else other than this, but it was at least an interesting challenge and experiment. I hope that anyone who read it did enjoy it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I actually loved this story. i have a theory that she is turning him into a beast, maybe like a mate? kinda like adam and eve except shes adam and he's eve (she gonna turn him into a creature like her, like how eve was made from adams rib sorta kinda). I would really love a part two, but if thats all there is of the story know that you did an amazing job with this onešŸ„°

LittleLotsOfLifeLittleLotsOfLifeover 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks! I'm not really sure if I am going to write anything, much less a sequel. Either way, the intent here was really to be open-ended conclusion. I've been really careful to not express anything directly to allow people to come to their own conclusions.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Interesting take on the Wendigo.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Very bad

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