All Comments on 'Inside Her Head'

by Submissive_Pet

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Oh GODS!!

from a submissive's P.O.V, holy fuck this is incredible. I was squirming in need from the way he punished her and degraded her, i loved the name calling and the way she begged him for more. wonderful piece.

Bree22Bree22over 9 years ago
*gasp*

My Master would never hit me.

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

Personally i liked it. some people get off on the name calling and as long as both the sub and dom agree that's its ok then don't see a problem with it. to each its own five stars from me and would love continued adventures from them. great read :-) for your first submission

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sorry gave it a 2* I was put off by the...

Very nasty 'put down' name calling, I feel that anybody who had any feeling for another person could not use such hateful words to them, I personally would not stay in a relationship where my partner would think so little of me and be so insulting. Words have an immense amount of power when misused.

evilangel_84evilangel_84over 10 years ago
smiles

Thanks for the great story! You totally made me smile! Hope you keep writing.

z724z724over 10 years ago
Nice first story

Very good, and so hot. I hope you keep writing!

visioneervisioneerover 10 years ago

Very intense first story, well-written. Good action. Hope you post more stories.

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 10 years ago
Welcome to Literotica, Submissive_Pet

What a wonderful introduction to your talent as a writer of erotica this was - you have every right to feel well-pl;eased with this! I hope it will be just the first of many stories you post here for our delight - well done, thank you and you may have five shiny stars for this one!

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