by Submissive_Pet
from a submissive's P.O.V, holy fuck this is incredible. I was squirming in need from the way he punished her and degraded her, i loved the name calling and the way she begged him for more. wonderful piece.
Personally i liked it. some people get off on the name calling and as long as both the sub and dom agree that's its ok then don't see a problem with it. to each its own five stars from me and would love continued adventures from them. great read :-) for your first submission
Very nasty 'put down' name calling, I feel that anybody who had any feeling for another person could not use such hateful words to them, I personally would not stay in a relationship where my partner would think so little of me and be so insulting. Words have an immense amount of power when misused.
Thanks for the great story! You totally made me smile! Hope you keep writing.
Very intense first story, well-written. Good action. Hope you post more stories.
What a wonderful introduction to your talent as a writer of erotica this was - you have every right to feel well-pl;eased with this! I hope it will be just the first of many stories you post here for our delight - well done, thank you and you may have five shiny stars for this one!