All Comments on 'Inside Information Pt. 02 (Original)'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Much Better!

I loved this one! You almost lost me on your first part 2 submission, but you got me back on this one. This one in my option is far better and is in the same category as part 1 when it deals with the emotions of the characters. Excellent job! Can't wait to see how the story ends! I look forward to the ending of the story, and future stories from you.

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