All Comments on 'Instant Victim'

I actually read every word of this story. I don't often do that with these stories. Very creative and well written. Amazing imagery and loved the concept! Feel free to check out any of my stories I'd love to hear your thoughts :)

Made a purchase and cut the shoes and everything else into pieces. That or she walked into the Police station and he spent the next 15 years in prison. After all she has his number and his DNA. PS - you fist a woman like that and you tear her sphincter muscle to pieces and she bleeds to death. Bad story, poorly conceived and not well thought out. 1 star.

Anonymous, did you read the story?

A: Everything Jerry did to her was consensual. Reluctant, sure, but consensual. And with a full train of witnesses.

B: There's no DNA, even if it wasn't, other than maybe a couple of skin cells.

C: Who says that Jerry was the one that did this to her?

D: Fisting -- Have you watched porn? I'm sure it's not comfortable, and in many it might cause some bleeding, but bleeding to death? No.

Besides, it's a story.

Also, thanks tickle, for the kind comments. I'm happy with the reactions to this, my first story.

I am new to this lifestyle, very new as in had very little interaction. The interaction I have had unfortunately was to be consensual but it was not since I was not allowed a safe word, was gagged the entire time, and the man was crazy. Contrary to what anonymous thinks I was never fisted prior to interacting with this man, Before he left I had been fisted and was an anal virgin. I can attest that it is painful and for me did cause bleeding but as the author wrote it did not cause me to bleed to death. This was a very interesting story and what the gentleman did to help her out was consensual although would not have been if she were not in the circumstance she was in. My question is how does she get the gag off as she didn't get it off by the gentleman I don't believe and she has to eat and can not go without food or water for four days. The shoes probably could be got off without a key but I am not sure how they are secured except it involves a key, There must however be a way to get them off without the key. Is there a follow up to this as there is the threat that the perpetrator would see her again in four days. I do not believe the man that helped her out put her in this situation as the perpetrator would more likely be the jerk that was enjoying her situation or not have stuck around. The perpetrator could have got on when the train stopped. Just my thoughts

Wow. Double wow. The author/s of 'Saw' (I think that's what the movies are called), would give you a co-conspiratorial nod. But...uhrm...judging by what the letters said, this here story ain't finished yet. And I'd love to know who the offending magician is, the older lady in the 'handicap' seat, her helper or the ringside commentator.

A human can actually go without food for a few days, but hydration is epitome. I'm sure she could slide a straw to her mouth somehow, or else she could invest in a drip-with-trolley, which would elicit a more understanding response from her boss. Cramping of the feet..., well she'd better find a way to get a month's load of calci-mags into herself, or some injection from a pharmacist. If those babies are steel-lined, she'd might want to skirt metal-workers with equipment that can do this: "Don't worry Miss, this can cut through steel like butter."

Please write soon.

Evebroughtanaxthistime

I liked it, despite not being a fan of public humiliation, so considering this isn't really my type of story and I liked it, I think that means it was pretty well written. If there is no second parter, then I dislike the loose ends not being tied up. I was hoping for an explanation to the impossibility of the situation, even if it was a fantasy one (like, oh a man had mind control powers and made everyone forget the time he had men point guns at everyone while he tied the girl up and then used powers to alter ant camera footage the whole time). The ending didn't seem like an end, but it didn't seem like the kind of story to expect a 2nd part from. Either way, it was really good. Keep writing! I liked your take on it and the way it was written.

I do have a second part brewing. I'm just letting it sit in my head for a while so that I can figure out exactly where it should go from here.

I love hearing stories of girls stuffed full in each of holes against her will. You did a fantastic job at keeping a vivid story with art of making it as sexy as hell. Can't wait to see more!

Very good.

5 stars for me.

Go on!

I do hope that you will finish this, I really enjoyed it.