All Comments on 'Intention and Design'

This was amazingly hot. It could use an editor's touch, but the writing is good and the descriptions are wonderfully vivid.

Rape

This rape & violdnce story is totally filthy & dehumanizing. It violates Literotica rules for submission & has been reportrd. It is misogynistic & completely dehumanizing. Whayever idiot wjo cleated this for picayion should be replaced.

When writing lesbian erotica you cannot assume bisexuality on the part of the reader.

What I mean is, you can’t have a lesbian dominated story ending heterosexual. It doesn’t work for people who only like lesbian stories. The ending destroyed the story which, let’s face it, wasn’t great to begin with.

Love the rape.