All Comments on 'Intentional Incestuous Impregnation'

Too all over the place.Way too many viewpoints.Inplausable situations.Good try but bring a little more to the table.

"...the way he cummed inside me..."

Really?

-10 points.

Also making fun of Mormons:

-10 points.

Aside from that, some goofy fun, but it might have been better if it were written more as a farce, something not meant to be taken too seriously.

It was hard to pin down who's son was who's for the longest time for me. You gotta be more clear on who ( or is it whom? I honestly get confused about that hot mess. ) you're talking about, I kept thinking James was Monica's kid. When you were doing the app messages you needed to clarify who was sending the messages to whom(?).

I loved the part at the end when the Ben went all feral and yelled at his dad to get out.

Too confused to follow the action with shifting POVs plus cuckold stories aren't cool with me.

Please write a second part for this story only from Monica's point of view. About the last 4 weeks & pregnant time, after the baby born time, how she is feeling about the fact that she is carrying her son baby & how naughty it. This story is very good because of 2 mom and 2 son story ( I don't like Kevin character here)

Little bit confused with first half to find whose mom or son with setting. Also not like to have 2 son for Keira. Would be nice only James 4 kiera too.

Liked the story but you went from sex to nothing no detail at all what happened after the first sex just some lines about nothing Gave it a 4!!!!!!!!!!!!

It did feel kinda all over the place, but I loved the fact that Ben wanted to impregnate his own mother.

More impregnation stories please!

How exactly do you disguise yourself as a Mormon?