by TheCitySlicker
A decent start, albeit with a few spelling errors. The most notable one is dye cast, which should have been die-cast. Other than that, not bad.
A clever and fun twist on the usual alien abduction. This looks very promising and I can’t wait to enjoy more of it.
When you mentioned climate change I knew it was science fiction. D- for the political correctness and bad grammar.
Ignore the D- comment. He's obviously a troll. This story is great so far, and looking forward to MANY more chapters.