All Comments on 'Intergalactic Sex Worker Ch. 01'

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SorchakSorchakabout 2 years ago

A decent start, albeit with a few spelling errors. The most notable one is dye cast, which should have been die-cast. Other than that, not bad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good start. I look forward to the rest of your story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

A clever and fun twist on the usual alien abduction. This looks very promising and I can’t wait to enjoy more of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

When you mentioned climate change I knew it was science fiction. D- for the political correctness and bad grammar.

SiodisSiodisalmost 2 years ago

Ignore the D- comment. He's obviously a troll. This story is great so far, and looking forward to MANY more chapters.

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Just a nurse looking to express herself. Interested in writing fantasy stories where people break their gender barriers, explore with one another, and find their happily ever after.

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