All Comments on 'Interlude: Mrs Donovan's Gate'

For a stroke job... Granted the male lead would be thinking with his dick, but the female would be looking for more romance. I think the overall story is good, but not enough to be great. You need to learn how to take your time and let it flow. An additional 100 words or so would have made this a much better story.

Good luck and Keep writing.

Keep it going, maybe even let her move to where he goes to school and maybe get married.

to hard to follow the build up didnt get to the sex so cant comment on it