All Comments on 'Internal Desire Ch. 01'

What an amazing story! So many different ways to take this going forward!!! I can't wait to see what happens between Nick and Tracy, but there's already a whole will they/won't they thing with him and Heather too. Will any of the other ladies reemerge (I hope so with Ivy and possibly the twins)...GREAT new series!

Very well done. I want to see more from Heather...love the stoner/gamer girl vibe. Might be because it pretty much describes me to a T ;)

@twodollargirl: Thanks so much for the amazing feedback! You'll just have to wait and see...I'm already cooking up chapter two as we speak! Hopefully it will be done soon! Stay tuned.

@hotlitgirl: Thanks so much for the feedback! Obviously Heather will be around throughout the series...I've always had a soft spot for stoner/gamer girls myself.

Flows nicely. It’s believable and fun.