All Comments on 'International Copulation Day'

Interesting story. More like a slice of life.

woodward

Glad you enjoyed it. In a way, it is like a slice of life, one I suspect many of us would like to have happen to us.

I thought this was fun - I enjoy it when a story takes a silly premise and commits to it. I feel like some parts of the story were kinda zoomed out - we were told about things rather than seeing them ourselves - but that does leave more time for the sex.

bumpercars

Yeah, that's a common tactic I use whenever I'm having trouble writing a certain part and it doesn't feel *right* to me. I zoom out so I can still show the audience the big picture before zooming back in on the parts that matter without them missing anything. Thanks for pointing out that I may have overused it here.

It means a lot that you said it was fun. The whole point was to turn the logic of morality on its head without going to far, so I'm glad it worked. Thanks for commenting.

Cnc Romance thats keeps the attacker on edge even after nice

Well, you were right, it is good enough to publish! Thanks for a very interesting story! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING STARS!

Enjoyable short story ..

onlydesicandi

Not sure I understand you, but thanks for reading.

RanDog025

Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you thought it was good enough to publish. I hope to have many more good stories on the way.

Should continue where he fucks the asuan guys gf.... and another where his mom join his sister and gf

sjl2

I know it was short (my shortest story so far), but if readers think it was enjoyable, that's all I'm aiming for. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Bigboned24

I admit I have no plans to continue this, so you are free to imagine what comes next. That being said, I admit that incest isn't really my thing, but I could certainly see Ling joining in on the fun. ;)

Solid premise, the back and forth of her vitriol is captured well

Sister Elizabeth Coelho if Auxilium is Christian whore to be used like a sex toy by all the nasty people who won't gv her a penny for using all her holes. Tide and strangled and chocked on cocks.

Karza

I often go for back and forth/Ying and Yang/push and pull in my stories. It enhances both the setup, the characters, and especially the sex. Thanks for reading.

Silly and fun. Five stars.

Nooo, tbis is perfect like it is. The reader can make their own ending (I think they loved to hate each other for some time, until they couldn’t deny reality)

Loved the story, short but to the point, well done

VeracityHeterodyne

Much appreciated.

Anonymous

I often try to leave readers room to imagine what their ending would be if I have no plans for a sequel. Thanks for reading.

Anonymous

This was my shortest story so far, so it may have come across as a bit direct, but if you enjoyed it, I'm happy.

This was an enjoyable story and made use of an interesting concept. Keep up the good work.

GhoulGhast85

I'll keep writing as long as people keep telling me they enjoyed my work. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

This was pretty good. Not a lot of IR Impreg kink stories out there. Most only involve risk; no follow up with actual preg confirmation, body transformation, birth, breastfeeding, etc. My only suggestion is to go into greater detail around the moment of ejaculation, or add an internal description of the fertilization.

Anonymous

You're right about most stories only involving risk now that I think about it. I'll definitely have to take that into consideration. You also made a helpful suggestion. Thanks for reading and commenting.

This was a pretty good story. Don't let the no talent hacks get you down. I would like to see the stories those losers write.

Anonymous

I try not to let it affect me, but I do find negative reviews and low scores demoralizing for me. I put so much effort into every step of my stories, it's hard when there are no tangible results. Regardless, this one got a relatively good score and most of the reviews are positive, which is all I need. Thanks for reviewing.