All Comments on 'Internet Lust to Real Life Love'

by mikebray33

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Argh!

Writing in the second person is so tedious to read. An otherwise hot story would've been better in first person. Women can rarely pull off a good second person but I've never read one done well by a man.

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