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Meg was looking straight in the direction where Chuck's car was. And after looking for a moment longer she said something to her boss and they separated. Her boss went back to the direction of their office and Meg started to walk straight toward Chuck. He panicked and even though it was completely stupid and childish he turned his car on and escaped from the scene.

When he drove home he was trying to tell himself that maybe she had not seen him there. But deep down he knew that there was no chance in hell that she hadn't seen his car when he had accelerated away.

Meg arrived at her usual time and as Chuck greeted her she was looking exhausted. Tired and sad. Maybe she had even been crying.

"We need to talk," was how she started and then there was no stopping it.

Chuck tried to say that he was just stressed out about his unemployment and that he would get his shit together and find himself a job but it was too late.

"Charles, honey, I did love you once but now everything has changed. You have been acting so weird and to be honest, I have lost all interest in you. I'm truly so sorry." was what she said in a quiet voice full of regret.

"Is there someone else? Is it your boss?" he asked her immediately but this only made Meg burst into an angry sob,

"You idiot. There is no one else. There never has been. But you have gone mad. Like what the hell. It is not normal to stalk me having lunch. And I haven't forgotten about the dildo. I'm sorry but there is something wrong with you. You do nothing but play with your computer all day and you don't even shower. I've had enough and I think there's nothing we can change at this point. You'll need to find a place of your own. And maybe you should consider finding some help for yourself. Like therapy or something, I don't know."

Now Chuck was crying as well. He looked at her and even though her tears had smudged her makeup Chuck thought that she had never looked as beautiful as she did at the moment of their break-up.

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EPILOGUE

Meg was lying in her bed mouth open thinking about her day. She had had nothing to do with Chuck in 6 months but now she had run into him just by an accident on the street. He had found a new job and was looking somewhat better than before. Still, she had felt nothing for him. They had greeted politely but Meg had felt extremely awkward as she had her new boyfriend with her and she had to introduce him to Chuck.

Her new boyfriend was not her boss nor some black fuckbuddy of Christine's but just a regular Joe. Well, since Meg was a good-looking woman Joe also was a handsome man. Meg could see in Chuck's eyes that he was thinking that she had traded up. That Joe was just better than him. And sadly, he would be right.

Chuck had asked when had they met and looked confused when she told her that she had met him at a party nearly three months after they had broken up. With a sigh, she was thinking that maybe Chuck didn't believe her. He probably thought that Joe had been around already when they were still together. But whatever Chuck was thinking it was no longer her problem. As far as she was concerned he could think whatever he wanted.

And then she was thinking about Joe and pondered that maybe all men were just wrong in their heads. Joe was tall and handsome. Wanted to have kids one day and was always polite and positive to her and her friends. Christine seemed to have respect for Joe and he had a more than decent job. He was a great conversationist and could make her see the stars in the bedroom. So a perfect boyfriend and even husband material.

For a small moment, she thought that even his dick was bigger than Chuck's but honestly thought that she had been more than fine with Chuck's cock as well. That had never been the problem.

But there was one ridiculous thing about Joe that she could not understand. It definitely took some effort from her to adjust to it but now that they had been dating for a while she pondered that if this was his only fault then maybe she could learn to live with it.

Her jaw felt numb but she still endured figuring that it would soon be over. Joe had been able to restrict himself for the first couple of times they were together but after that, the man just insisted on cumming in her mouth every time they did it. And he wanted to do it every night.

It was not like he would not have regular sex with her. Quite the contrary he always fucked her thoroughly before doing it but in the end, he just loved to cum deep into her mouth.

So there she was lying on her back holding her mouth open for Joe as he ran his hard cock in and out of her mouth. Fucking her into her mouth. Panting with pleasure and speeding up his paste. She could tell from his swelling cock that soon enough he would be filling her mouth with his seed. Did she have some sort of weird aura that attracted the lunatics?

Then Joe was cumming. Big spoonfuls of white cum filled her mouth and obediently she swallowed it all. Just like she knew Joe wanted. He lingered on in her mouth for a while and then finally as he left her mouth he lowered his face to her face and gave her a little kiss on the cheek.

"Thanks, babe! That was awesome!" he said in his deep voice and then they were cuddling each other. Waiting for the sleep to come.

"Well, at least he is not wanking at his computer every night," thought Meg just before she fell into the sweetest of dreams.

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ghost_readerghost_reader2 months agoAuthor

Thanks, Anonymous for your constructive feedback. You give us all a great example of how to give some criticism while still not being rude. To me, the greatest puzzle here is why people read these stories if they do not enjoy them. I just thought it would be funny to create a fictional character and try to imagine what is going on in his head when he reads stories that he hates. You are correct that many people have been hurt in love and my intention is not to make fun of them. My advice to all readers is that they should read the tags carefully and only read stories that they like. You know, stories that do not jeopardize their mental well-being as the stories did for Chuck. Consider horror movies or BDSM porn etc. They certainly are not suitable for all or not even for the majority of people. Neither are some of my stories.

There was another comment about the average size of men in general. This was one of my points in the story. The problems resided solely in Chuck's head. I did not underscore it too much because I wanted to leave some of these conclusions to be made by the reader.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

While your story was well written and fun it also took too big a stab at the readers in general. Viscous diatribes masked in contrived thoughts and conversations are not constructive and may alienate your readers and fans somewhat. Hopefully that’s not the case and your readers have a thicker skin than you. Have you been personally offended by some of the readers comments or something? This felt like an emotional attack on some of your readers less than flattering comments, at least on some level. Putting yourself out there openly, I’m sure, is hard to do and I admire your courage, however given the vast diversity in personalities and moods offhand comments are bound to happen. You are posting on an erotic literature site and the LW category is by far the toughest genre. Try and consider a large percentage of your readers have had failed relationships due to any number of reasons, infidelity included. People tend to feel chided and betrayed and all sorts of negative emotions as a result of relationship failures and those feelings are generally intensified and many other negative emotions arise after act(s) of infidelity. A lot of these readers are simply letting off steam and their negative comments could actually be healing for them. Please don’t take things personally or alienate anyone, after all they felt strong feelings enough, one way or the other, to be compelled to comment. Keep up the good works and thank you for your time and effort.

AA82ndAAAA82ndAA2 months ago

Insecure partners are the bane of a poor relationship. Does Joe reciprocate?

Good character development, Simple and to the point.... Especially Chuck's character as he seems like an old man in his head,

NudeInMaineNudeInMaine2 months ago

I googled “average penis size”. One study said the average size of an erect penis is 5.1”

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Wow, 19 words in we find out there is no wife and this is just another troll...

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