All Comments on 'Intersexed'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Interesting and different. I'm here for it, more please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Fun story with a classic premise. I do think there are some issues though, mainly in the first 3-5 "pages" that I think would have been resolved by answering some basic questions about the situation sooner. Of course, not everything could make sense early on because information was being withheld, but addressing some of the basics earlier on would have smoothed things out a bit. Overall I'm interested in reading part 2 when it's ready.

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I write two types of stories. The ones I prefer all contain elements of actual experiences that I have had in my BDSM career. The others, are fap stories. Stories with little to no set up or substance. All negative feedback given anonymously will be immediately deleted. If ...