by Spector_Dugan
Painfully boring, way too slow paced. We got he was inexperienced in the first 2 paragraphs and the rest was just repetitive. Kind of a decent premise but you just hammered and dragged this one out way too long.
Would rather wait longer for full-length stories. Not enough time to build tension or explore different activities in these vignettes. All chapters in this series have been the exact same setting and positioning, it becomes repetitive. Sorry to complain but your writing is awesome and would like to see more focus on one or two characters.
I would like to say that this premise is so unique. The writing has a flow to it that doesn’t halt reading. I do have to say that this chapter made me burst into laughter several times, and I loved it! Keep up the good work.
Ok, the last 2 were really hot. This one was quite uninspiring. I love the series Idea, but this one was not on par with your usual work
Interesting copulation! Hopefully that young fertile womb is nice and pregnant after being filled that much. Poor Lucas probably needs an iv after giving her that much baby making fluid. Hope to see progress in this development soon!
Beth's womb was good and fucked by Lucas. I can't wait for their baby to come. Then Lucas can cum to Beth with more experience. Beth could tell him "Cum into my arms, Stud!"
Poor Lucas, she treats him like a sack of shit then milks him for all he's got :(
ROFL! Okay, this was hilarious and redeemed the awful Evan/Ms. Collins debacle in the previous chapter. A little trope-y (beautiful girl/nerdy boy) but enjoyable nonetheless.
I have to agree with Fenris420 this chapter was fucking hilarious Lucas needs to learn how to fuck a girl it's very simple incock into pussy wham bam thank you ma'am. laughed my head off reading this chapter. he may want to put some meat on his bones if he's going to doing a whole lot of fucking this sounds he could barely go one round with the hot cheerleader. lol