All Comments on 'Intervention Wife'

Great story! Lots of fun and very sexy.

Well, he’s not going to Hell for being gay…

ZK

One of the BEST loving wife stories I have read. 5 giant stars.

I hope you still plan on writing. Your stories aren't complex, but they are good.

So funny, I think we need more dumb broads they make good didicated wives and the're not out looking for othe guys to screw around with. 5 stars

Brilliant! Instant favourite.

Well Done. I always enjoy a new slant (idea) on a story line. You wrote yours very well. 5*s. Thank you!

Good clean story. Very sexy.

Your future wife sounds like an "All American Girl".

Keep writing interesting stories.

I honestly kept thinking that Tracy was playing everyone. That she used Bob to get out of her parents house and after a while looked at getting out from the marriage but was afraid of the nut job. I kept thinking that she was going to drop breadcrumbs for John to clue into that she is the smartest person in the group. The ending especially had me thinking about her and how she got what she wanted.

Anyway, well done! Bravo!

What a fun read, and well written to boot!

LOL

Funny.

This is one of the funniest stories I've ever read.

WOW. Terrific story and an exciting read. Hilarious. Great plot & characters. Thanks for writing the story.

I loved this one... Funny, loving and sexy. Halfway in it was obvious that not only was she falling for him, but the womanizer was turning into a one-gal guy...

Loved it. Nicely done.

Thanks for giving your readers a few laughs.

-jog

Loved it.Was a fun read☺️

Light hearted sexy fun. One of my new favs

Loved it. Just wacky enough to maybe happen.

Absolute delight. Grinned all the way through the story

Deserves a 6th star. :-) :-)

Particle Reeder

This is an awesome story- loved the humour

What did Forrest Gump say? Stupid is as stupid does. That perfectly describes Bob. 5*.

This Mr. MajorRewrite was an ingenious story! Very well done! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS! My scores don't come lightly! Thank you, it was puurfect.

That’s the only way this story could end without John looking like total asshole. He was helped by the author portraying Bob as religious fanatic and idiot. He’s only a partial asshole. Poor naive Tracy is vindicated because her intervention was a success. Instead of converting a homosexual she converted a serial womanizer. Great story.

What a truly fun story!

Really funny, but just not for me.

I've read this a number of times. While it's got some twists to it, the fundamental story is a lovely one of a guy with a little too wide of horizons and a woman with far too narrow finding each other and finding happiness together. It's really a great story.

Brilliant! Funny, heartwarming, intelligent, not overdone. Thank you for this!

This was a terrific fun read.! I enjoyed reading it a bunch. Definitely a 5 star rating.

Bill S

A very entertaining read. Thank you. I think the ludicrous plot greatly enhanced the comedic side of the story.

This story is a bit like an episode of Columbo, everyone knows what has happened and what will happen in the end, its just the getting there that was both fun and unexpected.

The sex scenes were extremely hot too.

Sounds like the beginning of a Hollywood romantic comedy. Just clean it up a little. Less sex, more hijinks.

Totally bonkers and I loved it. 5⛤

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I was laughing out loud throughout most of the story. Totally crazy but really well done indeed.

This is a great fun story, well written and leaving me wanting more. I hope you never tire of writing.

Hilarious. Just lol!!!!

"If you don't lick my clit right now, I'm going to punch you!" Best. Line. Ever!!! An incredibly sexy and humorous story. I’ll definitely be revisiting this one.

Fun Story, light hearted and good time. 5 big Blazing stars for the writer. Thanks, Buster2U

Totally outlandish and impossible to happen - and one of the most fun and sexy reads I have seen in a long time!!

Excellent! So funny and sexy and so well written. 5 Stars! and a favorite.

5 star funny!!!

Just one word = AWESOME. Absolutely loved it, the plot, the writing & the sincerity of the complete story

Second read........Still a 5.

A great, fun story!

Wow. An original! Comedic while hotly progressing sexuality Them bang - great drama. Ending with a happy ending. Truly a holy inspiration. More more more.

Great story. Not taking religion seriously is not the same thing as bigotry. We are not required in any way to respect your stone age belief system.

STUPID!!!

Well she's certainly loopy enough to qualify as a Loving Wife and eager enough to fuck someone other than her husband. Alright, this'll do. Sadly I think she's just too ditzy and gullible to be an actual wife to him. And would you really be comfortable when someone sneaky like him could steal her away with another ploy like he tried? Perhaps it's for the best to just use her as a friend with benefits for as long as possible. But damn it all to hell, if Tracy isn't the sweetest girl ever albeit very naïve and gullible. I hope it works out for her in the end.

I'm impressed with her devotion especially when she endured the pain of anal just to try and please him and was determined to take him. In the end (hah) though it just wasn't for them. Big dick + small tight ass = pain. Pussy is better anyway.

As for Bob, yeah we knew that guy was a bit nuts. But in the end we see just how nuts when he goes full-wacko and blows up a yoga studio. Jeez what a loony.

Anyway this story was all kinds of awesome and weird and kinky and hot. Loved it. Wish more LW stories were like this instead of being about cheating skanks, cruel manipulative bitches and dumb-ass insecure wives that want to date other guys.

Excellent story. I know it was supposed to be fiction, but there is a certain element in the US, that is just stupid enough to believe it. I can totally see “ them” doing this. From the intervention, to blowing up the yoga studio.

5 stars.

Great story! It was a good balance between fun characters, humor, and raunchy sex.

WONDERFUL!!!!!

This was awesome!!!!! Super fun, super sexy, super clever, and so funny to see him work the process. What an amazing tale. Thank you!!!!!

The part that really made me laugh was the reference to Billy McAllister (or as he is known in the song by Bobbie Gentry, Billie Joe McAllister),

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Thanks, and 5 from me.

Incredibly silly but thoroughly good read

"My brain was nothing but static and I didn't sleep a wink."... great line in the story, after much context and build-up going into delivering that line.

Thank you for the story. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

That's a wildly fun ride! I had to take a laugh break.

Fucking awesome…fantastic story, supremely well done.

This was hilarious, great work!