All Comments on 'Interview with a Succubus Pt. 01'

Interesting start, not entirely sure at this point, but certainly has potential :)

More, pretty please?

Can't wait for the following stories to come. You've set yourself up for a difficult task ahead. Go ahead! Can you top THIS story? I double dare you!!!!

Super nice

This has promise. It's interesting and I'm curious where you'll go with it. Be sure to give part 2 a good copy edit before posting. I'll reserve further comment until you finish the series.

Real good start. I hope the next chapter keeps it rolling.

The craft of your writing is some of the best writing I've read on Literotica. I suspect that you write elsewhere and would like to know where. There's an art to the short storey. One of the most erotic stories I've read here. As a matter of fact I read it several months ago and came back to it again.